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[Y] Revsal's Tale Chapter 1
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Submitted On Oct18/09
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A tale of an Otter warrior stranded in a strange land. A work in progress, but a serious work. Please be genuine in your comments.
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     Darkness.
     Pain.
     Those were the last two thoughts that crossed Revsal’s mind as he lay bleeding near the base of a waterfall in the African jungle. He looked down to his right side and watched as the precious life-blood seeped from his side around his paw. The arrow protruding from the otter’s gut had was large and serrated, designed to intentionally cause agony and suffering in the victims last moments. Movement rustled in the nearby foliage, Revsal’s head whipped around causing fireworks to explode before his eyes with the intense pain that was caused. He looked up and into the distorted face of a Gianna soldier, his reptilian visage partially obscured beneath the hideous mask worn by the shook troops wore to frighten villagers into submission. The salamanders face split in what could only be a twisted grin. Giannans were known for their joy in causing pain to others, this was certainly no exception, and the enemy&...
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[Toy Maker]
Holy shit man,
This is awsome.
kinda makes you wonder what pain really is...
[DeathChain01]
I winced a bit during the second paragraph. Fantastic job on the details and storyline.
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